Have proposed text above in bold and italics.
Regarding KYCing of VitaDAO members involved in executive functions/accessing or contributing to IP, this should be dealt with during onboarding and not necessarily something that needs to go in the text here. But IMO it is extremely important to ensure these rules are enforceable against VitaDAO members if they are to be worth anything at all to the DAO and minimise risk of challenges to IP ownership etc, which could sink a valuable deal.
EDIT: Have proposed adding reference to KYC in the Code of Conduct / IP Policy proposed amendment here.